I Should be…

Currently I should be writing, and I really do not have any excuses since I deny the existence of writer’s block. The issue I have run into is that I know exactly where I want to take my story, there are just way too many ways to get there. I decided to draw what I was writing this evening, took me about three hours but I have the landscape in place for the scene; just need to add the details. 

The biggest problem I have is that I love my characters too much. I am writing a very crucial scene for the major protagonist of the first two-thirds of the story(it takes place before the reader knows he will be the protagonist), but every way I write it makes the reader like the character far too much. I need to step back and really write a character who the reader can love to hate. 

I’ll post what I have of that scene, maybe even from multiple different perspectives, along with a rough sketch of how part of it will look.

Another final tomorrow; really cuts into my creative drive!!

Published in: on May 7, 2008 at 9:01 am Leave a Comment

Ironman: Impressions

In the recent flood of howling mammoths, transexual rock stars, zombies, innumerable vantage points and sixty-one year old commandos the last place anyone would expect to find a believable hero would be from a comic book. The news is in, no not from the analysts, they are too busy trying to find out whether or not the film pulled a large enough share of the female population, the people speak with the sum of $100 million; Ironman is the first believable film of 2008.

Despite its obvious share of scientific impossibilities, Ironman thrives on convincing us that we can achieve the same power as Tony Stark. The power of Ironman is not mystical or genetic in origin, it is the result of scientific experimentation – trial and error that begins in the most humble of origins, a cave! By convincing us that if we invested enough time and money we could become Ironman, we have been convinced that Ironman is real. 

Ironman has its share of flaws and is in not a perfect film, however it is the first great film of 2008. With a load of comical moments and instances of intense poignancy Ironman is worth the price of admission and I highly recommend it.

Published in: on May 4, 2008 at 10:26 pm Comments (1)

Guest Blogs

Alright, I have run across two posts that made me laugh today and decided I’d post them up in case anyone else wanted to read them. 

The first one is from a friend’s blog, Patrick Shechet – a student at TAC, about saving gas mileage. I break all these rules, but rule number six made me laugh and someone might benefit from this:

Gas Mileage

 

The second one is for everyone out there who a) is fascinated by the books of Orson Scott Card; b) like Harry Potter and can’t understand why other people don’t like it; or 3) dislike Harry Potter and wants more fuel for making fun of him:

Rowling, Lexicon, and Oz

Published in: on May 2, 2008 at 9:17 pm Comments (1)

of Greatness

Find me a man without friends and I will show you a man, who though rich in wealth or fame, is the pinnacle of shame. The greatest measure of greatness is simply the measure of friendship. 

Published in: on May 1, 2008 at 7:18 am Comments (3)

of Standards

I will not be held to the standards of a mortal society the likes of whose immorality has not been seen since Sodom and Gomorra. I refuse to hold myself part and parcel to the pattern set before me by the ungodly. No matter how many stand up and seek to convince me to follow the path chosen for me by those who dwell in the temporal world; I will take shelter in knowing that I have achieved immortality in that even if I am slain I will not die. Therefore the ever-changing standards and edicts of the mortal realm do not hold sway over my future, nor do they influence the decisions I make concerning how I live my life. Instead, knowing that I have achieved immortality in being crucified with Christ, I need not fear the opinions or censure of any mortal who walks according to his own selfish desires.

The greatness of those who have set the standards of society is what brings war. The goodness of those who have set the standards of society is what brings hatred. The glory of those who have set the standards of society is what brings lust. But it is the goodness of God that destroys all these in the eternal fire of Hell, and it is the goodness of God that nullifies the standards they have set forth upon the Earth. 

Published in: on April 29, 2008 at 9:41 am Leave a Comment

Cavernlight

Three knocks were all it took. The door opened soundlessly and as he stepped inside it whisked shut behind him. The darkness he found himself in lasted mere moments before light flooded every corner of the room through a system of mirrors lit by a single torch. The torch was mounted at the top of a long stair, casting a broken light upon a narrow crevice in the wall. 

He took a moment to check his pistol and then mounted the stair two steps at a time. When he came abreast of the torch it went out, this time there was a rustle of wind. A pale light shown through the crooked entranceway, he ducked to step through it. A voice sounded for a moment on the thick, odorless air, but then he lost its sound. 

His path turned liberally through the rock until he found himself at the foot of a stone bridge. The bridge rested on the ground, as if it had been planned for some great purpose but then abandoned. He knelt and felt the stonework, dust came off at his touch. No one had set foot on this bridge in a long time. He stepped around it and walked past it toward another cavelike tunnel.

As he stepped inside he heard the voice again, it lasted a moment longer than before and this time it mocked. As it died away he stepped resolutely forward, not shortening his steps as the passageway bent down into the earth.

As he turned a sharp corner on this downward path a rough hand grabbed him by the collar and held a knife to his throat. There was a laugh of recognition before the man loosened his grip.

“Layne! I thought you’d never come,” there was the rough face of a man behind the knife, he had sleepless eyes. “This place isn’t healthy.”

Layne stepped past his friend and continued to walk, motioning for him to follow.

“What kept you?”

“Ran into a friend.”

“Bender? What happened to him.”

“You can watch it on CNN as soon as we get out of here.”

“About that…”

Suddenly the pale light of the cavern – for they had stepped into a cavern – gave way to a blinding floodlight, there were shouts all around them. Layne thumbed the safety off on his Armalite AR-24 and dropped to his knee. There was a blur of movement to his left and he heard a gun discharge from that direction, it sounded like a .45. He discharged a round at the blur and then rolled back into the passageway, he heard a cry of pain come from the direction he had fired.

“Garry!”

He stuck his head back into the cavern looking for his friend, there was the discharge of another gun and rounds struck too close to him. He whipped back into the tunnel and tried to calculate where the last shots had come from. There was the grating of rocks, Layne swung his gun to cover them. Garry crawled into the tunnel, he was favoring his right arm. 

“I’m hit pretty bad, I’ve got at least two rounds in me.”

Layne pulled a dated Charles Daly from Garry’s shirt, Garry had always favored that gun. He checked its load before swinging his gaze back toward the cavern looking for any movement. 

“Can you walk?”

“Just so long as its that way.” he said pointing back up the tunnel.

“Lead the way.”

Layne considered firing a couple warning shots into the cavern but knew they would need the ammunition. He followed Garry sideways so he could keep a clear view of any pursuers. Fifteen minutes into their trek he heard the sound of gunshots behind them, knew that their assailers had discovered they were retreating. He glanced up at Garry, saw he was turning white from blood-loss, cursed himself for not tying off his wound.

“Here wait, let me try to stop the bleeding.”

Garry slumped against the wall.

“Better hurry, they are going to be coming at a running pace.”

Layne smiled as he pulled a small roll of bandages from his belt, “Leastways we’ll hear them coming.”

As Layne tied the bandage into a knot Garry arched in pain and smacked the top of his head into a rock. He let out a solid stream of curses but they were drowned in the sound of grinding gears. Layne leapt up and began searching the rock wall, suddenly it pulled back away from him and revealed a ladder heading straight down.

Layne stepped into the small room and glanced down the hole, “We have to try it.”

Garry stepped beside him and could not see where the ladder stopped, “No! Remember the two holes in my arm, I don’t do ladders.” 

There was the sound of a pretty close shout down the tunnel they had just left, Layne stepped back into the tunnel and let off three shots.

“That should buy us a couple minutes, do you have any rope?”

“Yea I put it here next to the drapery,” he said sarcastically. 

“Give me your belt.”

“You have to be kidding me.”

“Would you rather stay here?”

Garry pulled off his belt and handed it to Layne who had already done the same. Layne quickly tied the two together with a strong knot, he glanced up at Garry who stood mortified.

“If you put it that way..” 

He stepped up behind Layne who whipped the belt around them both and cinched it tight.

“This should help you hold on, it won’t do all the work though; use your good hand.” 

“Thanks, I was looking for a Nanny. Whats your day rate?”

They moved awkwardly towards the ladder but Garry halted them short, “Aren’t you forgetting something.”

“Crap,” said Layne looking at the gaping hole in the tunnel’s wall. He loosened the belt and leapt to close the entrance. He threw all his weight against it but it wouldn’t budge. 

Garry sat down hard and said, “Try kicking it.”

Layne looked at him critically and then stepped back and lashed out with the toe of his boot, he felt a sharp pain and let out a loud cry that was greeted by mocking shouts from out in the tunnel. He cursed under his breath and then stepped out into the tunnel and yelled, “Shut up!” before letting out another warning shot.

“Which one of these rocks did you hit with your head?”

“How would I know, my eyes are on the front of my face, not the top.”

Layne was throwing himself against every rock on the front of wall. There were the sounds of footsteps down the tunnel and of a couple guns discharging at random. He began hitting the wall in desperation and just as a man leapt into view dressed in a ridiculous green jumpsuit he heard gears began to turn from somewhere in the wall. He laughed in triumph as he shot the green-clad man and then fired a couple more shots to stall his friends before leaping into the now sealed off entryway. 

It was pitch black now, he was able to find Garry after a series of repeated marco-polos but no matter how much he groped he couldn’t find the belt. 

“I gave you one simple task!”

“I don’t remember you saying anything.”

“There was a time I didn’t have to say anything, back when I left you behind a desk in New York!”

“Who was it who called me begging for someone to come save them from a completely fictitious warlord in the middle of death valley.”

“He is not fictitious, who do you think was just shooting at us!”

“Hey, don’t remind me about shooting! I was just beginning to ignore the pain, I rather liked my desk in New York!”

“If you find a way to get out of here I’ll buy you a new one.”

“Burnished oak?”

“Don’t get your hopes up,” suddenly the gears began to crank again in the wall. 

Layne looked in Garry’s direction, “Tell me you brought something to barter with…”

The wall began to peel back and a tall, muscular balding man stepped into the barely lit space, “Gentlemen, you have disturbed my very important dinner. Would you care to explain why you are here?
 

Published in: on April 27, 2008 at 7:32 am Leave a Comment

College

When college becomes more about the degree than learning its time to rethink college.

Published in: on April 9, 2008 at 10:42 pm Leave a Comment

Appendix C: of Dallet

In the first chapter of Visage of Scars I reference a character named Dallet who is the most notorious con-man in all of Ker. I decided early on that I would include a section about him in the appendices, this is the very beginning of his story.

  Thallen was the King of Belri when Galvant and Ethian ascended to the two thrones of Ker. Underestimating the resolve of his young neighbors and purposing to extend his lands for the sake of his son, he moved an army across the Fornor mountains against the plains city of Dyar. When the Belriån army began its traverse of the Ferrn Pass they found it guarded by two Laakseyd wardens, and though one was slain his death allowed the other to make his way to the plains and warn of the invasion.  

The warden Bendarik found King Ethian making a tour of the plains cities, the king immediately sent messengers to raise a levy. The people of the plains flocked to the banner of their new king and Ethian divided them into two armies, one he sent to Dyar under the command of the surviving Laakseyd warden; the other he led himself to the Ferrn pass. Thallen’s army was met outside the southern walls of Dyar and broken when Bendarik slew Thallen before the steps of the gate. The army of Belriån was pursued all the way back to the Ferrn pass where Ethian and the rest of the plainsmen awaited them. 

Garrian, a knight of Belriån took command of the broken host and sought to break through the barrier erected across the pass. After five valiant charges against the much greater force Garrian saw the army under the command of Bendarik approaching against the rear of his force. Gathering the remnants of the men of Belriån around him he made one last assault against the solid front of the plainsmen and through sheer desperation broke through five ranks of that army before being assailed by Ethian himself. Mourning the blood of Belriån, Garrian and his remnant surrendered in the gates of the pass; no one among them was unscathed. 

Garrian was brought to King Ethian on a litter, he leaned on two men to stand, “I fear that the blood of Belriån has been all but spent this day, I feel in my heart that we must call upon the people of Ker to possess our lands.”

The King grasped Garrian by the shoulders, “The blood of Belriån is still strong, let us forget the blood that lays between us. We will return you to your people, Belri will flourish yet.”

Then Garrian cried freely for he had seen many men die that day, his tears moved the King greatly and Ethian had in his heart to escort the shattered remnant home. He dismissed the greater part of the plainsmen to their homes leaving only 100 men with Bendarik to once again guard the Ferrn pass. He sought to escort the remnant of Belriån alone, but, fearing treachery the army of the plains chose 5,000 men to escort him; and the great host took a sennight to travel the pass and reach Belriån.

Now Thallen’s son, Dathon, had not yet attained his manhood and Belriån was in the charge of the steward Imgladell, a faithful steward who loved the prince. Upon seeing the host approaching from afar with the standard of Ethian before that of Belri he believed that an army was come to conquer the city. There were no knights in the city for they had all gone with the King to capture Dyar. Without hope for succor Imgladell threw open his gates before the approaching armies. But he feared in his heart for the life of the Prince and after arranging with a merchant to oversee the expected surrender he took the Prince and fled south in rags.

Published in: on April 4, 2008 at 9:15 am Leave a Comment

Cantalamessa

I have stumbled upon an amazing truth while reading a transcript of Raniero Cantalamessa’s message to the vatican during the season of lent. While I do not practice (celebrate/keep whatever word is best here) lent because of the complete absence of any such practice in the Bible I was blessed greatly by the message of Cantalamessa. The major purpose of his sermon was to convince the vatican that any words preached out of the mind of man were worthless words. Anyways, if you want to discover the full details of the message search it out on google, a search for Raniero Cantalamessa should get you something. I am giving you a single quote from his message so that you can see why I was so impressed.

 When one never succeeds in proposing the simple and naked word of God, without making it pass through the filter of a thousand distinctions and precisions and additions and explanations, which in themselves are even right, but extenuating the word of God, one is doing precisely what Jesus reproved the Pharisees and scribes for that day: one “nullifies the word of God”; one dilutes it, causing it to lose the greater part of its power of penetration in the heart of men. 

-Raniero Cantalamessa

 

Published in: on March 20, 2008 at 5:01 am Leave a Comment

of Leadership

Leadership is not in knowing exactly what to do, it is in acting like you know exactly what to do. The masses desire a guiding hand, a leader gives them one. That is why there are leaders that so many times lead people astray, that so many time lead people to their deaths. The mark of a great leader is not only in acting like you know exactly what to do, it is the dedication to search out the right path in every situation.

Published in: on March 18, 2008 at 2:19 am Leave a Comment