“Scars” Without Kings

While the compiling of both the script and novel of “Scars” are proceeding I decided it was time to show you how the people of Ker looked upon the events that are unfolding during the “time of no kings.” This piece is very interesting because each line of every stanza has the exact number of syllables as the same line in the next stanza.

 

His Brother King
By Bendarik of Laakseyd

Long he rode
Burned with hate,
What has stirred his heart in war
At the turn of years?
One hundred knights and one hundred spears
To slay his brother King. 

Iron and wood
Stood unused,
Why was the watch not forewarned
By the cry of fright?
A shade of darkness passing in light
Betrays his brother King. 

Empty thrones
Full of pain,
Where have gone the still young Kings
Their lands left to wane?
The war does not stop when he has gone
To mourn his brother King. 

 

It is clear that the first two stanzas are speaking directly of Ethian and his betrayal of Galvant, the third stanza can only be speaking of Galvant and his departure from Leyen shortly after he sent Ethian into exile. Being unaware of all of the events involved in this sudden departure, Bendarik could only see the sorrow of friendship lost as a possibility for driving Galvant into self-imposed exile in the middle of a demanding war.

Published in: on May 9, 2008 at 6:28 am Comments (1)

Cavernlight

Three knocks were all it took. The door opened soundlessly and as he stepped inside it whisked shut behind him. The darkness he found himself in lasted mere moments before light flooded every corner of the room through a system of mirrors lit by a single torch. The torch was mounted at the top of a long stair, casting a broken light upon a narrow crevice in the wall. 

He took a moment to check his pistol and then mounted the stair two steps at a time. When he came abreast of the torch it went out, this time there was a rustle of wind. A pale light shown through the crooked entranceway, he ducked to step through it. A voice sounded for a moment on the thick, odorless air, but then he lost its sound. 

His path turned liberally through the rock until he found himself at the foot of a stone bridge. The bridge rested on the ground, as if it had been planned for some great purpose but then abandoned. He knelt and felt the stonework, dust came off at his touch. No one had set foot on this bridge in a long time. He stepped around it and walked past it toward another cavelike tunnel.

As he stepped inside he heard the voice again, it lasted a moment longer than before and this time it mocked. As it died away he stepped resolutely forward, not shortening his steps as the passageway bent down into the earth.

As he turned a sharp corner on this downward path a rough hand grabbed him by the collar and held a knife to his throat. There was a laugh of recognition before the man loosened his grip.

“Layne! I thought you’d never come,” there was the rough face of a man behind the knife, he had sleepless eyes. “This place isn’t healthy.”

Layne stepped past his friend and continued to walk, motioning for him to follow.

“What kept you?”

“Ran into a friend.”

“Bender? What happened to him.”

“You can watch it on CNN as soon as we get out of here.”

“About that…”

Suddenly the pale light of the cavern – for they had stepped into a cavern – gave way to a blinding floodlight, there were shouts all around them. Layne thumbed the safety off on his Armalite AR-24 and dropped to his knee. There was a blur of movement to his left and he heard a gun discharge from that direction, it sounded like a .45. He discharged a round at the blur and then rolled back into the passageway, he heard a cry of pain come from the direction he had fired.

“Garry!”

He stuck his head back into the cavern looking for his friend, there was the discharge of another gun and rounds struck too close to him. He whipped back into the tunnel and tried to calculate where the last shots had come from. There was the grating of rocks, Layne swung his gun to cover them. Garry crawled into the tunnel, he was favoring his right arm. 

“I’m hit pretty bad, I’ve got at least two rounds in me.”

Layne pulled a dated Charles Daly from Garry’s shirt, Garry had always favored that gun. He checked its load before swinging his gaze back toward the cavern looking for any movement. 

“Can you walk?”

“Just so long as its that way.” he said pointing back up the tunnel.

“Lead the way.”

Layne considered firing a couple warning shots into the cavern but knew they would need the ammunition. He followed Garry sideways so he could keep a clear view of any pursuers. Fifteen minutes into their trek he heard the sound of gunshots behind them, knew that their assailers had discovered they were retreating. He glanced up at Garry, saw he was turning white from blood-loss, cursed himself for not tying off his wound.

“Here wait, let me try to stop the bleeding.”

Garry slumped against the wall.

“Better hurry, they are going to be coming at a running pace.”

Layne smiled as he pulled a small roll of bandages from his belt, “Leastways we’ll hear them coming.”

As Layne tied the bandage into a knot Garry arched in pain and smacked the top of his head into a rock. He let out a solid stream of curses but they were drowned in the sound of grinding gears. Layne leapt up and began searching the rock wall, suddenly it pulled back away from him and revealed a ladder heading straight down.

Layne stepped into the small room and glanced down the hole, “We have to try it.”

Garry stepped beside him and could not see where the ladder stopped, “No! Remember the two holes in my arm, I don’t do ladders.” 

There was the sound of a pretty close shout down the tunnel they had just left, Layne stepped back into the tunnel and let off three shots.

“That should buy us a couple minutes, do you have any rope?”

“Yea I put it here next to the drapery,” he said sarcastically. 

“Give me your belt.”

“You have to be kidding me.”

“Would you rather stay here?”

Garry pulled off his belt and handed it to Layne who had already done the same. Layne quickly tied the two together with a strong knot, he glanced up at Garry who stood mortified.

“If you put it that way..” 

He stepped up behind Layne who whipped the belt around them both and cinched it tight.

“This should help you hold on, it won’t do all the work though; use your good hand.” 

“Thanks, I was looking for a Nanny. Whats your day rate?”

They moved awkwardly towards the ladder but Garry halted them short, “Aren’t you forgetting something.”

“Crap,” said Layne looking at the gaping hole in the tunnel’s wall. He loosened the belt and leapt to close the entrance. He threw all his weight against it but it wouldn’t budge. 

Garry sat down hard and said, “Try kicking it.”

Layne looked at him critically and then stepped back and lashed out with the toe of his boot, he felt a sharp pain and let out a loud cry that was greeted by mocking shouts from out in the tunnel. He cursed under his breath and then stepped out into the tunnel and yelled, “Shut up!” before letting out another warning shot.

“Which one of these rocks did you hit with your head?”

“How would I know, my eyes are on the front of my face, not the top.”

Layne was throwing himself against every rock on the front of wall. There were the sounds of footsteps down the tunnel and of a couple guns discharging at random. He began hitting the wall in desperation and just as a man leapt into view dressed in a ridiculous green jumpsuit he heard gears began to turn from somewhere in the wall. He laughed in triumph as he shot the green-clad man and then fired a couple more shots to stall his friends before leaping into the now sealed off entryway. 

It was pitch black now, he was able to find Garry after a series of repeated marco-polos but no matter how much he groped he couldn’t find the belt. 

“I gave you one simple task!”

“I don’t remember you saying anything.”

“There was a time I didn’t have to say anything, back when I left you behind a desk in New York!”

“Who was it who called me begging for someone to come save them from a completely fictitious warlord in the middle of death valley.”

“He is not fictitious, who do you think was just shooting at us!”

“Hey, don’t remind me about shooting! I was just beginning to ignore the pain, I rather liked my desk in New York!”

“If you find a way to get out of here I’ll buy you a new one.”

“Burnished oak?”

“Don’t get your hopes up,” suddenly the gears began to crank again in the wall. 

Layne looked in Garry’s direction, “Tell me you brought something to barter with…”

The wall began to peel back and a tall, muscular balding man stepped into the barely lit space, “Gentlemen, you have disturbed my very important dinner. Would you care to explain why you are here?
 

Published in: on April 27, 2008 at 7:32 am Leave a Comment

Appendix C: of Dallet

In the first chapter of Visage of Scars I reference a character named Dallet who is the most notorious con-man in all of Ker. I decided early on that I would include a section about him in the appendices, this is the very beginning of his story.

  Thallen was the King of Belri when Galvant and Ethian ascended to the two thrones of Ker. Underestimating the resolve of his young neighbors and purposing to extend his lands for the sake of his son, he moved an army across the Fornor mountains against the plains city of Dyar. When the Belriån army began its traverse of the Ferrn Pass they found it guarded by two Laakseyd wardens, and though one was slain his death allowed the other to make his way to the plains and warn of the invasion.  

The warden Bendarik found King Ethian making a tour of the plains cities, the king immediately sent messengers to raise a levy. The people of the plains flocked to the banner of their new king and Ethian divided them into two armies, one he sent to Dyar under the command of the surviving Laakseyd warden; the other he led himself to the Ferrn pass. Thallen’s army was met outside the southern walls of Dyar and broken when Bendarik slew Thallen before the steps of the gate. The army of Belriån was pursued all the way back to the Ferrn pass where Ethian and the rest of the plainsmen awaited them. 

Garrian, a knight of Belriån took command of the broken host and sought to break through the barrier erected across the pass. After five valiant charges against the much greater force Garrian saw the army under the command of Bendarik approaching against the rear of his force. Gathering the remnants of the men of Belriån around him he made one last assault against the solid front of the plainsmen and through sheer desperation broke through five ranks of that army before being assailed by Ethian himself. Mourning the blood of Belriån, Garrian and his remnant surrendered in the gates of the pass; no one among them was unscathed. 

Garrian was brought to King Ethian on a litter, he leaned on two men to stand, “I fear that the blood of Belriån has been all but spent this day, I feel in my heart that we must call upon the people of Ker to possess our lands.”

The King grasped Garrian by the shoulders, “The blood of Belriån is still strong, let us forget the blood that lays between us. We will return you to your people, Belri will flourish yet.”

Then Garrian cried freely for he had seen many men die that day, his tears moved the King greatly and Ethian had in his heart to escort the shattered remnant home. He dismissed the greater part of the plainsmen to their homes leaving only 100 men with Bendarik to once again guard the Ferrn pass. He sought to escort the remnant of Belriån alone, but, fearing treachery the army of the plains chose 5,000 men to escort him; and the great host took a sennight to travel the pass and reach Belriån.

Now Thallen’s son, Dathon, had not yet attained his manhood and Belriån was in the charge of the steward Imgladell, a faithful steward who loved the prince. Upon seeing the host approaching from afar with the standard of Ethian before that of Belri he believed that an army was come to conquer the city. There were no knights in the city for they had all gone with the King to capture Dyar. Without hope for succor Imgladell threw open his gates before the approaching armies. But he feared in his heart for the life of the Prince and after arranging with a merchant to oversee the expected surrender he took the Prince and fled south in rags.

Published in: on April 4, 2008 at 9:15 am Leave a Comment

Another Quick little Portion

Alright, I figured it was time to throw up another little piece of what I’ve been working on. And by little, I mean little. 

 Anathoth hated Laakseyd, the unfriendly stone walls inflamed the cold winter nights until the stale, frozen air burned deep into his skin. Not that he was certain it was winter, he had stopped counting after the first month of strict imprisonment. He knew the grey-mop thrusting from his throat was a sign that he was too grizzled for the exact number of days to matter. 

Published in: on February 3, 2008 at 2:41 am Leave a Comment

The Warden of Laakseyd

Another excerpt from the Visage of Scars, this is a portion of the very first draft of a very important conversation that takes place toward the beginning of the story. The dialogue is really rough, but I had to start somewhere and will iron it out once I get everything down on paper. 

  Dawn had just broken when the news was scattered abroad and Queen Haletha crossed the cold, flagstone path to pay a sudden, clandestine visit to the ailing warden of Laakseyd, to garner from him the location of the grave-maker of Ker.

“I have a request that demands your peculiar skill.” The Queen seemed agitated, though she veiled her unease with a patronizing smile.

“Another demand like that of Dallet?” queried the warden. I am still under suspicion for allowing you near the most scandalous con-man in – “

“I do not have time for reminiscence. “Snapped the Queen.” You have doubtless heard the bells tolling this past hour.”

“It is true then, he has been condemned?” the warden sighed in a voice thick with consternation as a barely perceivable shiver shook his body.

“To the graves, though he will not be there long if I have my way.” Murmured the Queen. “I must speak to the grave-maker, I believe you know where he is being held.”

“Impossible I refuse to aid you in treason.” The warden insisted. “Let this traitor be punished as he deserves I for one will not share – “

“He will be punished.” The burning fire in the Queen’s words trapped the warden’s protest before it could raise to his tongue. “I will not have Leyen punished with him, or any part of Ker for that matter.”

“Ahhh, you fear the rebellion?” posed the warden. “The city is safe I assure you, dissent never endures through the winter.”

“Regardless, I will not have us face war without our most capable tactician.” She stated and at the same time with a nimble flick of the wrist she produced a silk purse from the sleeve of her emerald dress. “A little something I learned from your con-man.”

Terrific, ——–”

  I just wanted to get another piece of the puzzle up here for you to peruse; enjoy.

Published in: on January 17, 2008 at 4:31 am Comments (1)

A Visage of Scars

The following is an excerpt taken from a story I am currently writing, it began as an exercise in style but has developed into a project of much larger scope. I am a very non-linear writer and this is nowhere near the beginning of the story, but I hope it intrigues you to the point that you want to read more. 

  

The hard ground was strewn with deep, putrified cracks emitting nothing but the sun scorched stench of the dead they held, often forcing Ethian to walk endless, serpentine leagues back to his eastward line of travel, and soon after his course turned southward, winding between the very deepest wrinkles in the ground; and all around him there loomed nothing but a decaying wasteland, stretching defiled and degraded from the horizon upon which lay a thin streak of life. Towards this horizon the eastward course wound, and there it mocked him; and he did not halt, for the earth-scars grew across the wasteland, and their cavernous jaws were an odious proposition for the wayfarer, so ferocious that often Ethian must run forward like an agitated deer stealing away from the stillborn tremors. 

Until at last, scarred by the sighing sun, he devoted all hope to the one phantasm that fluttered on the edges of his tightly drawn consciousness; a lone figure plying its way through the spoiled blemish. The last rays of the sun catcalled on the skyline when Ethian finally came face-to-face with the gnarled grave-maker of Ker.

 

 I’ll post more pieces of this project as I move forward. 

Published in: on January 16, 2008 at 4:15 am Comments (1)